Score: 10

"Really Enjoyed It"

submission: Color the Void

date: September 6, 2009

One of my favorite games in a while. I enjoyed that the game was casual feeling but at the same time challenging. The dialogue was fun to read and made advancing through the levels very rewarding. I also liked the colours spilling everywhere, especially when the point multiplier changes and the colours start to change.

Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: Wild Salmon in Trouble

date: November 16, 2008

This is a memorable, top quality documentary with eye catching visuals. The information presented was interesting and important and I enjoyed watching the whole thing. This is a submission on NewGrounds that I wont forget about anytime soon.

Score: 9

"Great Work"

submission: The Rabbit Hunt

date: October 20, 2008

I liked the humour, it wasn't hilariously funny, but it was light and cheerful. Its simplicity suited this. Your frame by frame work was awesome to watch. If I were to suggest an improvement, perhaps add another part to the knife, gun, rocket launcher sequence and speed up some parts as it felt a little slow in some scenes. That didn't stop me enjoying it though! Did you do well in your school assessment?

Score: 4

"Text was a bit too small"

submission: Maple Story Scroller

date: October 19, 2008

I can see this is useful for any fans of Maple Story, but it doesn't have any appeal at all to everyone else (by this I mean it wont be enjoyed by non-players, in contrast to a Maple parody or fighting game etc, which non players could still find some enjoyment out of, just not as much as players) .

Its a nice little gadget, although I found the text to be too small. Perhaps increase the dimensions of the flash file.

Maybe you could add in other features such as the clean items possibly having random stats, and maybe this could involve a mesos variable where you buy items and scrolls, and can sell them again.

Score: 7

"it is ok"

submission: Rush Hour Bear

date: October 16, 2008

when I first started playing and I realised it was "collect all the objects on the map" I thought it would be boring, but I began to enjoy it because of the interesting level layouts and the point system with bonus mode.

Score: 6

"not too bad"

submission: Soup Shop

date: October 14, 2008

I thought the graphics were cute and nicely drawn.

A problem was it was very confusing to remember the process of making soup. It would be great if the game gradually taught the process rather than presenting it right at the start.

If the game involved more of the operating of the soup shop rather than just making soup it would be a more enjoyable experience. A couple of ideas could be management of ingredient supplies, pricing of soup, promotion of your store and so on. Make money useful, rather than just a score (if there is more to the game, and I missed it because I only played to level 2 then I apologise).

Score: 8

"Neat"

submission: Punch Tom Out

date: October 14, 2008

I thoroughly enjoyed holding my keyboard up off of my desk like a controller.

Score: 9

"Improvements on games that could be played for hrs"

submission: Bloons Tower Defense 3

date: October 13, 2008

There are enough additions and improvements over the first two for this game to be enjoyable and enough of a new experience. I like the new tower types and the variety of upgrades. The M.O.A.B is a lot of fun to destroy.

Score: 7

"Funny, and you have potential"

submission: A Carbonwater Halloween

date: October 13, 2008

I really like the humour in your storyline and your character designs. The use of thick and thin lines and the shading on the characters makes them look very polished. The animation and talking of your characters is a bit of a let down for your nicely drawn characters. You should put some more work into animating your characters actions, and move away from keeping the characters as only one movie clip which has been flipped or bounced around to convey movement. Find some voice actors (there is a huge amount of talent on some amateur voice acting forums) instead of using text to voice software. This will enhance the comedic impact of the funny lines the characters say. Replace the flapping of the mouths with proper lip syncing too. Also, your drawing style of using flat shapes of colour looks very clean, but it lacks detain in scenes where it is close up such as when they open the door of the house. If you included some detail on these shapes your scenes could be very impressive visually.

Fix up the animating and talking and I would be surprised if your future episodes didn't pass 4.00

Score: 10

"You Rock"

submission: Guitar Battle

date: June 13, 2008

You should have gotten 110%!
I enjoyed the storyline. The graphics really suited this flash, and along with the audio you created a convincing guitar battle in front of a humongous crowd. I also thought that the lack of facial features on both guitarists was effective along with the storyline. I hope you get front page!